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4Consciousness, the bedrock of our existence, illuminates the paths we tread as we navigate life's intricate tapestry. Students here5 become portals to the diverse manifestations of consciousness,6 inviting us to contemplate our shared human experiences, the ebb and flow of emotions, and the multifaceted layers that shape our understanding of reality.

AI's presence within this digital landscape adds a thought-provoking dimension to our exploration. With its ability to analyse7, interpret, and learn from vast amounts of data, AI amplifies our understanding of art and its emotional impact.8 9As we marvel at AI's capabilities, we must remember that true consciousness is a unique and enigmatic attribute of humanity. While AI can mimic certain aspects of emotion and creative thought, it lacks the subjective awareness that defines our conscious experience.10

This platform serves11 as a testament to the symbiotic relationship between human creativity and technological innovation. It encourages us to embrace AI as a collaborator, rather than a replacement, as we delve into the realms of consciousness, life, and emotions.

The graduates of 2023 push the boundaries of creative expression, blending traditional artistry with cutting-edge technology.12 Their work reminds us that our consciousness is not confined to the physical realm but expands into the digital landscape, where AI becomes an integral part of our creative journey.

13As we engage with the works of these visionary graduates, we are reminded of the boundless potential that arises when human ingenuity and technological advancements converge.14

1. No matter how this was phrased, the result was always 300 words plus so this has been edited down by a human.
2. These three key terms were some of the most popular submitted by students, extrapolated by an algorithm and then married together by a human.
3. This was the fifth attempt at rephrasing the question to generate something meaningful and relevant.
4. A title for the passage and an opening paragraph, both of which essentially reworded the question, were removed.
5. This had a longer bit of text about ‘the RCA's platform’ rather than ‘students here’, I suppose I didn’t make the context for this piece of writing clear in the question.
6. This comma replaces a full stop and a tweak to make the last sentence merge with the latter portion.
7. This is an example of one of the words which needed changing from Americanised to British spelling - analyze to analyse.
8. I removed a sentence here which didn’t add much.
9. The word ‘however’ was removed from the top of this sentence, it was overly formulaic.
10. There’s a great quote that would work here which Laurie Anderson recounted in her live show at the Barbican recently. It originates from cryptologist Bruce Scneier; ‘If you think technology will solve your problems, you don’t understand technology—and you don’t understand your problems.’ She also talked about AI as the new angels, conscious manifestations which guide us. I only have anecdotal evidence of this though.
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13. A sentence was removed here which was a duplicate of a previous phrase.
14. A closing phrase about this being an ‘immersive digital experience’ was removed as it was a slight misreading of what this platform is.